Tuesday 3 July 2012

Laptop: a memorable montage; not quite a memorable movie

A few hesitant piano notes sound in the background, a cello groans into life and some random images flash across the screen. A despondent man rides in an open truck, surrounded by his belongings, a car cuts through lush tea gardens, a blind man taps his way through city streets, a child peeks at a stranger from his father’s embrace, a pensive boy lies alone on a train berth. 
And a few cryptic words appear discreetly on the montage – “shift”, “windows”, “vision”, “memory”. 
As the promo closes with the title Laptop, familiar keypad terms resonate with new meaning. 
Be it in terms of performances, dialogues, cinematography, editing or music, subtlety defines most parts of Kaushik Ganguly's latest movie venture.

A line, a word or a gesture, amply etches nuances of characters and relationships, as men and women from various social and psychological backgrounds momentarily intermingle. A lower-middle class father’s (Pijush Ganguly) joy after buying a secondhand laptop for his 
computer-student son, finds expression in a rather lavish purchase of mutton. A rude, overbearing tea planter (Saswata Chatterjee) exposes his softer side in a single line about his surrogate child: 

“ছুটে এসে যখন বাবা  বলে  জড়িয়ে  ধরে  . . . তখন  মনে  হয়  . . . আমার  ছেলে . 

A blind author (Kaushik Ganguly)   offers a unique “vision” of reality, claiming that his “characters” save him from loneliness. His subsequent rendition of “এই  লভিনু  সঙ্গ  তব  সুন্দর  হে  সুন্দর ”, enriches both the song and the scene.

Brilliantly understated performances from veterans (Saswata Chatterjee, Arindam Sil, Rajesh Sharma, Rahul Bose) and youngsters perfectly complement this nuanced screenplay. Special mention must be made of Pijush Ganguly’s breakdown, following accusations of stealing, and Aparajita Adhya’s quavering voice as she desperately asserts her husband’s dignity against Arindam Sil’s scathing charges. Kaushik and Ananya move effortlessly from tenderness to sentimental sulking to downright bitterness, capturing various shades of an undefined relationship between author and typist. Churni's artificial manner of speaking highlights her strain in maintaining the decorous veneer of a posh tea planter's wife. Gaurav balances the naïveté and street-smartness of Jion with perfect élan. His half-truths bring a smile while his helpless gasps following the exposé are heartrending.

Sirsa Roy’s cinematography and Mainak Bhaumik’s seamless editing create some lasting cinematic moments. A mundane close-up of milk blending in tea, suddenly morphs into a womb-image with an incessant heartbeat in the background. The author’s (Kaushik Ganguly) wonder about pervasive human fear of death, despite the everyday demise of our dreams and relationships, cuts to a long shot of Rajesh Sharma, a funeral truck driver. With Kaushik’s philosophical musings in the background, the camera slowly pans on Sharma, sleeping peacefully in the vehicle.  
Yet such crisp editing becomes a bane elsewhere in the movie, leaving several unanswered questions. We see Jion fiddling with the newfound laptop and staring at Raya’s (Ridhima Ghosh) photos in it. But we never know what exact information he derives from the machine and how. Consequently his discovery and pursuit of Raya remain completely unconvincing.

Glaring holes in the plot and unnecessarily dramatic twists further mar a potentially brilliant film. How does a poor driver (Rajesh Sharma) steal the laptop from a swanky medical clinic and that too from the director’s office?  Why does the clinic’s laptop contain information about the director’s daughter? The hurried pace of  the Jion-Raya track leave nagging queries in its wake. Arindam Sil orders Jion’s family to leave the city within a day and they conveniently move to their ancestral home in Malda. Such melodramatic twists destroy the otherwise realistic tenor of the film. In a bid to focus on the surrogacy angle, the writer rushes through the first half, ignoring significant details about the laptop’s initial journey. Thus despite many laudable elements Laptop remains a montage of a few moving moments but fails to be a memorable movie.


6 comments:

Sharmishtha said...

I simply cannot put to words how well-written this review is. You have really expressed in a very eloquent manner, all the confused reactions that some of us might have had after watching Laptop. Besides the questions that you have raised, I also have some of my own...I guess I should call them reservations, or doubts, rather than questions. One of them is the lack of a background score when the end credits roll. While that might not be a significant shortcoming, I did feel that it tempered down the emotional quotient of the film to a great extent. I do have the bad habit of judging a film by the emotional reaction it evokes in me at the end, and this is where Laptop failed to move me, even after all its stupendous imagery and seamless editing as you have mentioned. The end of the film being as melodramatic as it was, it really demanded a much stronger score than just a bunch of birds tweeting...I don't know how to explain this oddity...but I truly felt as if my heart wanted to cry out at the tragedy of Indra, the helplessness of Jion and Tarun, the yearning in Subha's eyes...but it was getting needlessly gagged by the emptiness of the abrupt silence at the end. Also, the surrogacy angle was unnecessarily dragged, with Indra holding a separate conversation with each member of the household, which really wasn't needed to establish the tension in the family surrounding the kid. As you have mentioned, this affected the first half of the film where the director had to compromise with the plotlines of the first three tracks, which in my opinion, would have made for far better and intriguing cinema, if expanded further.

Anyway, all in all, Laptop was a pleasant one-time watch, but I wish it had lived up to our expectations, what with us having to wait for more than two months to catch a glimpse of Jion and co. But salute to your wordplay and amazing writing skills that have imparted the perfect shape to our (mine for sure) fuzzy thoughts and reactions.

Madhuchhanda Ray Choudhury said...

My dear Sharmishtha - if this comment is anything to go by, your thoughts are certainly not fuzzy!! They are not only articulate but really moving. I especially like that part where you say: "my heart wanted to cry out at the tragedy of Indra, the helplessness of Jion and Tarun, the yearning in Subha's eyes...but it was getting needlessly gagged by the emptiness of the abrupt silence at the end".
You are so right about the ending - the melodrama demanded a more dramatic music score. Plus it was never clear why Indra had that revolver in his pocket - the kid said that they did not buy anything from the market.
The pace of the first and the second halves also do not match - in an attempt to flesh out the second part, the director compromised on the first.
As we had discussed earlier, I think "Inconsistent" is the word that describes Laptop the best. Like those intermittent bursts of its background score, the film only scores in sporadic sparks of brilliance - but fails to score in its entirety!!!
Thanks for all the appreciation - as I have said before - you guys are the inspiration behind my writing! :D

Sharmishtha said...

O forgot to mention last time, tomar collage gulo shobkota durdanto...very meaningful!!! :)

Madhuchhanda Ray Choudhury said...

Thank you thank you! otao partly tomar credit - thanks for introducing me to Picasa :D

Anonymous said...

Nicely Written Review......I Totally Agree With Your View Of
Unnecessarily Dramatic Twists In The Movie.....And The Story Of The 'Driver' Could Have Been Handled In A More Better Way....But Anyways,It Was A Great Script & And An Out-Of-The World Acting By Kaushik Ganguly!!!...

Madhuchhanda Ray Choudhury said...

@Anonymous: thanks! yes, I wish they had handled the plot better. It's a shame that those brilliant performances (including that of Kaushik Ganguly) failed to make as much impact as they would have if backed by a stronger script.